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thanks

Post by mick » Thu Jul 15, 2004 8:07 am

hey thanks yeah its different from other stuff i guess it flows different

Post by badseed » Tue Jul 13, 2004 10:48 am

i really like the way you write, there is something unique about it.

Post by MAtty » Tue Jul 13, 2004 4:50 am

Thats good really good! I haven't read any of your other stuff yet, but this is good.

Post by camelface » Mon Jul 12, 2004 9:29 pm

Sounds so much different. The stuff you post when you screw up your log-on is better lol. It's still good though. The problem is you raised the bar so many times.

I tell you man, I still like it a lot. It's just weird at first because it doesn't have da U-sual flow of masta mick1.

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Post by mick1 » Thu Jul 08, 2004 1:56 pm

I watch something so visceral
Life ended, ending
Live in color sharp images
War and death
In a box while I eat
People die
Day time, night time, prime time
First coverage all the time
The box makes death clean
Even with the screams
Rent from madden crowds
Burnt flesh and frenzied words
The box makes it pure
And safe

Its not
Death is ugly
It smells like shit and tears
Its burning pain and loss
The copper taste of blood
No thoughts of honor or
Country
No red white and blue
It’s alone
More alone than its forever
An eternity of stink, and, fear
Nothing.

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