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[mick1]

I watch something so visceral
Life ended, ending
Live in color sharp images
War and death
In a box while I eat
People die
Day time, night time, prime time
First coverage all the time
The box makes death clean
Even with the screams
Rent from madden crowds
Burnt flesh and frenzied words
The box makes it pure
And safe

Its not
Death is ugly
It smells like shit and tears
Its burning pain and loss
The copper taste of blood
No thoughts of honor or
Country
No red white and blue
It’s alone
More alone than its forever
An eternity of stink, and, fear
Nothing.

[camelface]

Sounds so much different. The stuff you post when you screw up your log-on is better lol. It's still good though. The problem is you raised the bar so many times.

I tell you man, I still like it a lot. It's just weird at first because it doesn't have da U-sual flow of masta mick1.

[MAtty]

Thats good really good! I haven't read any of your other stuff yet, but this is good.

[badseed]

i really like the way you write, there is something unique about it.

[mick]

hey thanks yeah its different from other stuff i guess it flows different