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Postby badseed » Sat Aug 14, 2004 11:35 pm

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My screams are silent
But yet loud and clear
My life is broken and bent
But no one seems to care

I am lost
But no one's looking for me
No one's willing to pay the cost
To set me free

I am scared
But no one's there for me
Through everything I've bared
No one was ever there to see me

I am lost
Why isn't anyone searching for me?
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.

-Dr. Seuss
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Postby MAtty » Sat Aug 14, 2004 11:40 pm

How to respond. I like it. I can relate to it. I think most people can relate to it, or all of the stuff you write. Good job.
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Postby badseed » Sun Aug 15, 2004 10:30 am

thank you matty.
Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind.

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Postby MAtty » Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:01 am

Any time... I you can always know I mean what I say.
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Postby AbyssalBlackGate » Sun Aug 15, 2004 10:51 pm

great poem. i know exactly what you mean.
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Postby badseed » Sun Aug 15, 2004 11:43 pm

thank you. i just feel like im lost inside my own life and no one is willing to help me, ofcourse it doesnt help that i often times dont want helped by certain people...
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Postby camelface » Wed Aug 18, 2004 9:12 pm

perfect. sums up emotion super well. I know a lot of people can relate. excellent.
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