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Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby coup-detat » Fri May 22, 2009 1:36 pm

Human beings are the most dangerous game
Look in a prison, they ain't got names
Like animals snarling their regrets
Into the whispers of high to low air pressures
Cans sit at my feet
Paint or beer depending
Soon, uniforms swarm like bees to a flower
Handcuffs muffle my crime and time
Sitting in the station, counting minutes like bong hits
My mits still in shackles
Police spit and cackle
They're criminals like everyone else
Time melts into a stream of events
I choose not to repent
Sins are badges like Jew patches
Everyone has a record
So spin that record
Sitting on the stand
Like judgement day
A questionairre
I ain't ever been in a jumpsuit
Thank god for being white
Not in the law's sight
Racist pigs
Huntin' nigs
Like kids hunt bugs
Light up the nugs
Ain't ever been chained for that
Service to the community shouldn't just be for criminals
Every person does the minimal
Effort for their town
With a frown
Calling out like a magpie's cry
Smell nuttin' in a tiny village
Police won't let it
Reputations to hold
They're all sold
To the higher up feds
Maybe the mob
So sob
Our system's all wrong.


[Tell me what you think, it's much more powerful when vocal. It's actually going to be put to music later, right now though, it's just slam poetry. Any suggestions for a title?]
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Jawn Disease » Fri May 22, 2009 9:25 pm

'Swarm'
Fuck tha police, comin' straight from St. Hungry
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Maggot » Sat May 23, 2009 1:29 am

"Fuck the System"
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Jawn Disease » Sat May 23, 2009 1:40 am

Maggot wrote:"Fuck the System"


Taken ;)
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Maggot » Sat May 23, 2009 1:44 am

Oh, that's right: System of a Down already has a song called that. :P
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Jawn Disease » Sat May 23, 2009 5:20 am

Maggot wrote:Oh, that's right: System of a Down already has a song called that. :P


And the Exploited, and Citizen Fish, and Total Chaos, and Showtek, and it's also a book by Abbie Hoffman
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Jawn Disease » Sat May 23, 2009 5:22 am

Oh and Nasum
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby coup-detat » Sat May 23, 2009 10:16 am

I was considering calling it "Chains", though I'm not sure. Thoughts?
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Maggot » Mon May 25, 2009 3:06 am

coup-detat wrote:I was considering calling it "Chains", though I'm not sure. Thoughts?
"Chains" is also a good title. :)
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Re: Unnamed Poem about my arrests (you can help me name it)

Postby Maggot » Mon May 25, 2009 3:07 am

Jawn Disease wrote:
Maggot wrote:Oh, that's right: System of a Down already has a song called that. :P


And the Exploited, and Citizen Fish, and Total Chaos, and Showtek, and it's also a book by Abbie Hoffman
Total Chaos is one of the best bands I've seen live. :D
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