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some poems

Postby lets_all_rise_up » Tue Nov 03, 2009 4:52 pm

as the plane flies
engine roars past
to look down
upon the sky
is of
clouds and what seems
like water
but
is
it

****
packed into our
seats inside
(pressured plane)
on the
way
to
our destinations

****
can
this
be
like
what
you
think
a
poem
would
be

****
1.
to see the old locations
ever to really fret upn what
I will see again
2.
to see
the
ocean
the beachs
the mall
the things
I grew
up with
3.
going from
home
(where
i use to live)
towards
the musicstore
to
which
I
love
and back
4.
the
bus rides
to and
frow
5.
the people
I
talked
to
6.
what joy
its going to
be
7.
it is
8.
to see
9.
it all
again
---------------------
more soon
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Re: some poems

Postby Jackmorrow » Fri Nov 13, 2009 11:55 pm

that was great. the arts have had a massive influence on me (and most other people) and my political beliefs. ill post some of my stuff if you want
After the revolution, every intersection will be a dance floor - Wingnut Dishwashers Union
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