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by **badseed** » Sat Jul 03, 2004 12:37 pm

BROKEN
It’s been falling apart for years
Slowly crumbling down
Piece by piece
Falling to the ground
Broken promises and lies
The hatred is in my eyes
People scream and tempers flare
There’s a thickness in the air
Pieces of our lives broken and destroyed
Lost and gone forever
Not much left to hold us up
Soon there will be nothing left
A pile of broken pieces
Lives lost among the rubble
However did we get caught up in all this trouble?

by **camelface** » Mon Jul 05, 2004 4:43 pm

shit, thats a good poem. I think it's my favourite by you ever....hmmm....yeah probably. It's amazing, amazing work.

I'm leaving for Calgary for 5 days, see ya

by **badseed** » Mon Jul 05, 2004 5:46 pm

thanx, i didnt think it was all that great though. parts of it i dont like, and parts i do, but oh well.

by **mick1** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 1:01 pm

trulygreat stuff. you right from the inside

by **MAtty** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 4:58 am

MAn... Badseed is one of my fav. writers! I swear on the little frame of thing being *my body* this is really good work! Hey Badseed, we are doing poetry in summer school, and he have to bring in some poems that we really like. I was wondering if I could bring in some of your poems and share them?

by **MAtty** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 4:58 am

MAn... Badseed is one of my fav. writers! I swear on the little frame of this being *my body* this is really good work! Hey Badseed, we are doing poetry in summer school, and he have to bring in some poems that we really like. I was wondering if I could bring in some of your poems and share them?

by **badseed** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 10:28 am

why thank you matty. if you want to use them you can. may i ask which ones you liked the best?

by **MAtty** » Tue Jul 13, 2004 3:48 pm

Tahnks, the class's jaws will drop. Um... I like this one, Ink, and a few others I read a while ago. (remember when I PMed you and asked about soemthing?)

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